Whispers of the Inner River

In shadows deep, a truth lies veiled ;
A sacred river , intuition frail .
In a world where profit blinds ,
Women's psyche , it unwinds .

Cut off from inner knowing streams ,
In a maze of ego's dreams .
Structures cold and hearts confined,
Intuition's voice , so maligned .

A dual life , a mask they wear ,
Sweet and dutiful , beyond compare .
Yet within , a fire burns bright ,
Craving freedom , seeking light .

Yearning for a space so true ,
Where wild hearts can chase the blue .
Prowl and growl , their spirits hunt ,
For desires fierce , upfront .

Civilized chains , they bind us tight ,
Cutting off our primal sight .
But deep within , the river flows ,
A knowingness that ever grows .

Rise ; oh women , heed the call ,
Let the inner rivers fall .
Nourish landscapes of the soul ,
Reclaim the wild , become whole .

~ Her Inner Psyche .
发布者 XXterminate
9 月 前
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qubec 7 月 前
XXterminate : Frankly speaking I like your writing and poem. I have just write what I think. Its not about giving any advice to any one and its not my business.
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qubec 7 月 前
XXterminate : :smile: :smile: :smile: Dont be a teacher. I m not hear to listen or learn anything from you or anyone here. and not here to teach anyone. your language shows u r lack of logic. U say I am older ... yes I m older... try one night with me .... u will be pounded hard sensually n ruthlessly multiple time and ways. people are fucking with before and after marriage to another partner. What logic u r justifying. You are agree with me or not I dont care. 
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XXterminate
XXterminate 出版商 7 月 前
AmbitiousEntry5 : Thank you for your kind words ! :heart:
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AmbitiousEntry5
AmbitiousEntry5 7 月 前
This is such an incredibly meaningful poem, thank you for sharing it. :heart:
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XXterminate 出版商 7 月 前
milehrke : Thank you so much for your kind words ! I’m truly touched that the poem resonated with you in such a meaningful way . It means a lot to know that it brought some inspiration to your day . Your appreciation brings warmth , and I’m grateful for your thoughtful response and countered the point profoundly !
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XXterminate
XXterminate 出版商 7 月 前
qubec : Stop giving silly advice to someone that you make judgements with little given evidence ; I don't have to preach to you about basic psychology . You look very older than me and married too .
We get something more in lost consciousness than gained conscious state ; how about you write down a poem so that I can judge you a little more precisely ? 
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Matured_whisky 8 月 前
XXterminate : But in your confusion you and me cudnt gel together. Care to try again
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milehrke
milehrke 9 月 前
After reading the comments here I will only say that this is a beautiful and inspiring poem. It's pointless trying to rationalize its meaning. Thank you for sharing it! 
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qubec 9 月 前
XXterminate : Have you put leg on first step :wink: ? You need to talk with many people to judge their mentality, more you talk more you can understand the person. I think confusion prevents to take step forward. You have to take decision based on experience and wisdom. rest is all talking without meaning. And character is very different. here we are expressing our wild lustful emotions within us, which drives person when he/she is alone.
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qubec 9 月 前
XXterminate : Right but ..... if you like or love submissive feeling, you have to surrender, then how you can command your own mind?
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XXterminate
XXterminate 出版商 9 月 前
qubec : When it comes to breaking visible or invisible barriers, a measure of common sense is the essential first step.


And choosing the right person ? Such a simple task—like finding a needle in a haystack during a blackout .

But hey , confusion builds character , right ?  :wink:
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XXterminate
XXterminate 出版商 9 月 前
qubec : Indeed ,  there is no greater authority than the command of one's own mind 
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qubec 9 月 前
Breaking ... invisible barriers. Needs dare and wisdom. You are confused to select right person... insnt it? :wink:
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qubec 9 月 前
XXterminate : Absolutely...... You need to be commanded by a master who can fire or make u a beautiful flower at right time.
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SteveW96
SteveW96 9 月 前
XXterminate : you need a partner :wink:
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XXterminate
XXterminate 出版商 9 月 前
SteveW96 : I need a mind itself to control my mind , whether it comes to firing or flowering .
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SteveW96
SteveW96 9 月 前
XXterminate : or you fire the guards when you took control of your mind again
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XXterminate
XXterminate 出版商 9 月 前
SteveW96 : Yeah , because breaking free from mental chains is just like escaping a maximum-security prison. All you need is a spoon and a few decades .
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SteveW96
SteveW96 9 月 前
You only need to have the courage to break free from those imposed mental chaines but thats easier said than done.
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XXterminate
XXterminate 出版商 9 月 前
BangaloreBigBull : Thanks ! 
Yeah , because nothing says "freedom" like breaking free from imaginary chains. Maybe she'll even find a unicorn to ride off into the sunset while she's at it.
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very nice poemk and i believe she can break herself from chain and enjoys her freedom 
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